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Post by Teros on May 10, 2007 13:40:37 GMT -5
A battle of body, mind and spirit against yourself, that is one of the best plot twists i have ever seen
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 14, 2007 18:38:56 GMT -5
High Friends In Low Places..
Rina stood silent for a minute and closed her eyes.She started to think about all the people she missed back home.Her thoughts where mostly centered Lola and Robotboy.Rina longed to see them the most.
SA Rina:What are you doing?
Rina:(Eyes still closed)Thinking about friends...
SA Rina:Don't bother their no help to you here.Your offline.
Rina::(Eyes still closed) You wrong..You not hear IRB? I go home when Charger blares.
SA Rina:Hows that invole your friends?
Rina:(Opens eyes)Without friends I no go home...they take care of me..and you.
SA Rina:What do you mean if I go break down so do you.Meaning I shut down in real world you do to.
SA Rina:Why?
Rina:We one and the same.I need you for battle and you need me for heart.
SA Rina:........
Rina:We need each other to survie..without me you atc like Kamazazi:to full of pride and thingyy-
SA Rina:thingyY?!? Why you little exuse for a tin man..I'll show what thingyyness can acconplish!(Tosses metal stick away and lauches machine gun arms at Rina).
Rina used her own metal stick to launch herself in the air and douge the bullets but unfrountnely she landed right in frount of SA Rina.
SA Rina nugged Rina off the side of the vanocano rim and sent her falling into the pit below.Wile in the mists of falling Rina jabbed her stick into the side of the crater and hung there.(Rina was close to the wall when she was falling).
SA Rina:You human wanna be! Is no way to defeat you other then...This!
SA Rina swooped down as Rina climbed on top of the stitck and cut the stick in half but Rina jumped off the stick and lauched her feet thrusters into action.Rina fled out out of SA Rina's way just in time flew to the top of the vancano rim.Rina ran out of gas she reached the very top but snatched the end of a near by hanging rope.Rope?
Rina looked up and saw IL holding the rope with SA IRB.
The two images pulled Rina up fast SA Rina closed in.Seeing SA closing in Rina speed climbed up the rope but SA Rina blasted the rope in half and Rina began to fall again!
Rina closed her eyes and waited for the feel of hot lava to intake her but there was non.Rina stood floating over the lava pool in the air safe.
SA Rina:What!
IL:Rina has a extra gas to kick when she is in real danger.
SA Rina:Why did I never know of this?
IL:You think so little of Rina that you never though about what powers other then attack weapons she has.
SA Rina:Why don't I have that?
IL:You do but only Rina's half the brain can active it.
SA Rina:Why?
IL:You poses all the weaponery wile which Rina dose not except for Laser Eye Beams and Super Strengh so it's olny fair Rina posees something you do not.
Rina:I have other powers?
IL:Very few secert ones like this but you brother can tell you about those later-
IRB:(Taps gently IL on the head)Shut up....
IL:(Rubs head gently)Oooohh..Ok watch it with the tapping you in SA mode remeber?
IRB:Sorry...(Changes back to normal mode)
Rina:(To IRB) Me taught you no help again?
IRB:This was Image Lola's idea not mine.
IL:Image Robotboy said he would only help once but there was never any rule that said I couldn't save you.
IRB:Anyway now that thats settled..I just want to inform you have a brand new full gas tank to run on so don't waste it.
Rina:Don't worry I won't! I know what happen if I do.
IRB:Good.(Snaps fingers and disapears with Lola's Image).
SA Rina:Now we finish this for good.There is no left to help you , your on your own here on out.
Rina:(Gulps)Everything ride on me..
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on May 15, 2007 1:43:21 GMT -5
Wow good luck Rina!
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Post by Teros on May 15, 2007 13:42:46 GMT -5
edit: forget i ever said anything
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 15, 2007 15:43:14 GMT -5
Who are you refering to?
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 17, 2007 17:28:49 GMT -5
Rina stood floating over the lava pool in looking down in worryment.
SA Rina:You know your fate outcome lies in this battle.
Rina:(Looking down) I know...
SA Rina:Lets get on with it...
Rina:Wait...
SA Rina:What?
Rina:If me lose and you win can you do one thing for me?
SA Rina:What?
Rina:Treat others nice..
SA Rina:I told you battle bots have no niceness in them.
Rina:I do.
SA Rina:Your only have a little battle bot.I'm a more avanced battle bot.
Rina:You lack compassion which makes you careless to the more important in life.
SA Rina:Like?
Rina:Friendship and kindness...Those are to gifts I poses you don't.
SA Rina:Thats only beacuse Moshimo made you that way.Robotboy was made to the same gifts.
Rina:SA Robotboy poses thoses gifts too.
SA Rina:Only because he learned it through hanging around humans.
Rina:You could learn.
SA Rina:No thanks I perfer to live life as I was programed.
Rina:Then teach you otherwise.(Zaps SA Rina in the face with her eye beams and flys up toward the vancanic rim).
SA Rina:Owww! Where'd you learn to be thingyy?
Rina:(thingyy smile)You!
SA Rina:Why you little bolt head!
Rina:Na na na! You can't catch me! (Flys up in to the sky but not away from the vancano top.
SA Rina:You brat! I'll defeat you and throw your out of this mind once and for all.(Zooms up after Rina).
SA Rina:We finish this now!
Rina:Let's dance!
SA Rina:Too make it fair..Lets only use our laser eye beams for this.
Rina:Fine.
SA Rina:Just know when you lose your eye power you'll have nothing left to fight with!
Rina:I have fighting skills.
SA Rina:Yeah but I can over come that and blast you derectly.
Rina:(Gulps)
(In the Real World)
(In Moshimo's living room)
Gus:Ugh! We been sitting here for two hours! When that charger gonna be done!?!
Tommy:It takes time Gus...We have to wait..
Robotboy:We no wait if this never happend..
Gus:Dude I told you it was a accident.I didn't mean for it to happen.
Lola:None of us did but it happended...I for one will sit here all night if I have too..
Moshimo:I don't think thats possible...Your families must have gotten notice of your absents.I think it's time we sent home so they don't worry.
Tommy:We can't go home..and leave Rina...Robotboy will go nuts waiting to see if she recovered and he may start attacking worring about Rina.
Moshimo:Then may be it be best if Robotboy stay here for the night...
Tommy:Um....
Moshimo:I'll send him home in the morning...
Tommy:Ok...
Lola:I want to stay here..
Tommy:Lola you can't your the daughter of a aniabitor if your missing in action your father may send all kinds of law forces out to find you.
Lola:I don't care.Rina is my responsible to look after..
Tommy:Right now she's Moshimo's reponsibley.
Moshimo:I send word the mourning about Rina.
Muemue:Rina will in good hands Lola.
Lola:Ok...
Moshimo:Ok I get Robotgirl to take you home.
Gus:Are you she knows the way?
Moshimo:Robotboy will download Bay Area's cowardnets to Robotgirl.Robotboy?
Robotboy:Okey-Dookie...Robotgirl come here..
Robotgirl walks over to her compaion and he stares her in the eyes.
Robotgirl:Huh...(Looks into Robotboy's eyes)Ohhhhhh......(and)
(SSSSSSSSSMMMMMMMMOOOOOOCHHHH!)
Robotgirl planted a big kiss on Robotboy...
Robotboy(Gags and pulls free of Robotgirl)Ick! What you do?!?
Robotgirl:What you staring into my eyes so what else should me do?
Robotboy:Scan data!
Robotgirl:Ohhhh....Me try again?
Moshimo:Someother time the kids are too concered to go so I'll let you stay the night and deal and contact your parents somehow without being found out and Muemue no more soap oparas for Robotgirl.
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 17, 2007 17:31:04 GMT -5
The Begining Of The End......
Rina stood floating over the lava pool in looking down in worryment.
SA Rina:You know your fate outcome lies in this battle.
Rina:(Looking down) I know...
SA Rina:Lets get on with it...
Rina:Wait...
SA Rina:What?
Rina:If me lose and you win can you do one thing for me?
SA Rina:What?
Rina:Treat others nice..
SA Rina:I told you battle bots have no niceness in them.
Rina:I do.
SA Rina:Your only have a little battle bot.I'm a more avanced battle bot.
Rina:You lack compassion which makes you careless to the more important in life.
SA Rina:Like?
Rina:Friendship and kindness...Those are to gifts I poses you don't.
SA Rina:Thats only beacuse Moshimo made you that way.Robotboy was made to the same gifts.
Rina:SA Robotboy poses thoses gifts too.
SA Rina:Only because he learned it through hanging around humans.
Rina:You could learn.
SA Rina:No thanks I perfer to live life as I was programed.
Rina:Then teach you otherwise.(Zaps SA Rina in the face with her eye beams and flys up toward the vancanic rim).
SA Rina:Owww! Where'd you learn to be thingyy?
Rina:(thingyy smile)You!
SA Rina:Why you little bolt head!
Rina:Na na na! You can't catch me! (Flys up in to the sky but not away from the vancano top.
SA Rina:You brat! I'll defeat you and throw your out of this mind once and for all.(Zooms up after Rina).
SA Rina:We finish this now!
Rina:Let's dance!
SA Rina:Too make it fair..Lets only use our laser eye beams for this.
Rina:Fine.
SA Rina:Just know when you lose your eye power you'll have nothing left to fight with!
Rina:I have fighting skills.
SA Rina:Yeah but I can over come that and blast you derectly.
Rina:(Gulps)
(In the Real World)
(In Moshimo's living room)
Gus:Ugh! We been sitting here for two hours! When that charger gonna be done!?!
Tommy:It takes time Gus...We have to wait..
Robotboy:We no wait if this never happend..
Gus:Dude I told you it was a accident.I didn't mean for it to happen.
Lola:None of us did but it happended...I for one will sit here all night if I have too..
Moshimo:I don't think thats possible...Your families must have gotten notice of your absents.I think it's time we sent home so they don't worry.
Tommy:We can't go home..and leave Rina...Robotboy will go nuts waiting to see if she recovered and he may start attacking worring about Rina.
Moshimo:Then may be it be best if Robotboy stay here for the night...
Tommy:Um....
Moshimo:I'll send him home in the morning...
Tommy:Ok...
Lola:I want to stay here..
Tommy:Lola you can't your the daughter of a aniabitor if your missing in action your father may send all kinds of law forces out to find you.
Lola:I don't care.Rina is my responsible to look after..
Tommy:Right now she's Moshimo's reponsibley.
Moshimo:I send word the mourning about Rina.
Muemue:Rina will in good hands Lola.
Lola:Ok...
Moshimo:Ok I get Robotgirl to take you home.
Gus:Are you she knows the way?
Moshimo:Robotboy will download Bay Area's cowardnets to Robotgirl.Robotboy?
Robotboy:Okey-Dookie...Robotgirl come here..
Robotgirl walks over to her compaion and he stares her in the eyes.
Robotgirl:Huh...(Looks into Robotboy's eyes)Ohhhhhh......(and)
(SSSSSSSSSMMMMMMMMOOOOOOCHHHH!)
Robotgirl planted a big kiss on Robotboy...
Robotboy(Gags and pulls free of Robotgirl)Ick! What you do?!?
Robotgirl:What you staring into my eyes so what else should me do?
Robotboy:Scan data!
Robotgirl:Ohhhh....Me try again?
Moshimo:Someother time the kids are too concered to go so I'll let you stay the night and deal and contact your parents somehow without being found out and Muemue no more soap oparas for Robotgirl.
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on May 18, 2007 0:13:18 GMT -5
lol way to go Robotgirl Robotboy didn't expect that. Anyway keep it up.
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Post by Teros on May 18, 2007 8:26:10 GMT -5
um, thingyy?
what in glaven does thingyy mean?
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 18, 2007 18:15:13 GMT -5
Where did I put thingyy?
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Post by Teros on May 19, 2007 8:36:41 GMT -5
Just proof read that last chapter and you should see it quite clearly
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Post by robotboyiscute on May 28, 2007 16:44:39 GMT -5
Eye Attack!
(In Rina's mind)
SA Rina:Are you ready to let fate decide to out come of this fight?
Rina:Me ready...
SA Rina:Then lets begin...
Rina:Wait!
SA Rina:What now?
Rina:If me die...Promise you take care of friends and be nice to them.
SA Rina:I'll cosider it...But that dosen't I'll do it.
Rina:Promise!
SA Rina:Why do you care so much? Your not even human!
Rina:Human Emotions!
SA Rina:So what if you can feel human emoitions you still can never become one of them.
Rina:Maybe oneday..
SA Rina:Ohhhh! You were built to feel like human but never acultly be one!Theres no power in the world to grant that wish!
Rina:Then I learn what it means to be human!(And maybe become one later on in life time)!(Zaps SA Rina in the face with eye lasers and flys up out of the way of SA Rina's grasp).
SA Rina:Ouch!Why you!(Shootes laser eyes but misses).
Rina:Haha! You have to do better then that!
SA Rina:Like this?!?(Zaps eyes at Rina but misses Rina's head by a inch).
SA Rina:Your lucky that missed you!
Rina:You not lucky!
Rina zaps SA Rina in eyes but SA Rina zaps Rina at the same moment and the to them take a brief recover timeout.
SA Rina:That hurt a little..
Rina:Yeah....Is this how it's gonna be?
SA Rina:Yes.Try not to get blind.
Rina:Blind!?!
SA Rina:It might occor.It's very possible in this situation.Try make sure it dosen't happen.
Rina:You no hit blind person right?
SA Rina:I wounld hit a blind person.Theres no houner in that.
Rina:Whooo..
SA Rina:But since theres no blinds around here I'll just attack you!(Eye zaps Rina)
Rina got shot in the eyes and went blank for minute and began to fall but in wile falling she recovered her eye sight and she turned her Zoom Boots and zoomed up to SA Rina and shot her in the eyes.
SA Rina:Ohhh..Your crafty! But I'm crafty too!
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on May 29, 2007 1:03:04 GMT -5
Go Rina! Go Rina!
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Post by Teros on May 29, 2007 10:07:59 GMT -5
Plenty of twists and turns (and typos) in this fic.
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Post by robotboyiscute on Jun 3, 2007 9:48:36 GMT -5
Feelings Are Important.
Rina:I tired of this I want go home!
SA Rina:Don't think you I'm tired to? But The only way to win is to get your oppent to pullet in the valcano.
Rina:Then I do so!
Rina zapped SA Rina in eyes in fury wile SA Rina returned the eye attack aswell.
The two robots zapped each other untill their opic sensors blured a little.
SA Rina:Were never gonna get out of here are we?
Rina:Only winner can leave.
SA Rina:If by some mircle you won what would you do with me?
Rina:Still you to help save friends.
SA Rina:Why do you care so much? I mean their only humans.
Rina:Humans are my friends without them I could not exist or learn.You also created by humans.
SA Rina:Moshimo only built me as battle bot.I sever no other purpose.Your the one always in control!(Lunges a punch at Rina but Rina dodges it).
Rina:You wrorng Moshimo created you for protection to keep people safe.Battle Bot only have of what you are...
SA Rina:What's the other have?
Rina:Emotion.
SA Rina:(Voice breaking) I am not you! I do not have feelings!
Rina:Yes you do.You part of me.We make up Rina.
SA Rina:You will not pat me down with sipthy! I am stronger then you!
Rina:(Angry) No you not!(Uses Detacheble fists punch!)
Rina's detachble fists hit SA Rina in the face!
SA Rina:You forgot you can't use anything but your eye beams!
Rina:You get me upset!
SA Rina:Then my side goal is compleate!
Rina:What?
SA Rina:I just like to antagnize my foes by get them up first then have them blindly attack me without thinking.
Rina:Well It won't happen to me!
SA Rina:Will see...
(In the Real World)
Robotboy had blasted down the door of Moshimo's lab and was now watching Rina recharge.
Robotboy:I miss you...
Moshimo:(Walks ins)Robotboy there you are , I've een looking for you.You awile ago.
Robotboy:I come to see Rina...I no leave her side anymore.
Moshimo:That's very kind of you Robotboy but Rina needs peace to recharge.
Robotboy:But I want to-
Moshimo:You want be with Rina I know but we can't do anything but let her charge for now.
Robotboy:But-
Moshimo:Theres nothing we can do except wait.Why don't you go see Tommy and the others.
Robotboy:Ok...(Hugs Moshimo gentle)(Then scruuries out of the room).
Moshimo turns and walks to the door.
Moshimo:I hope you recover soon Rina.Your brother is not happy waiting..(Walks out the door and actives a hidden wall pannel to activate a force field).
The force field actives and Moshimo walks back where the others are are waiting.
Moshimo:(Wile walking)Lets hope that will hold Rina safe until tomarrow.
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