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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 4, 2007 0:35:14 GMT -5
This is a story about where Rina learns why becoming human is good thing and why her bro wants to become human.
Ch-The Accident
It was nice day outside in Bay Area but for Tommy , Lola and Gus it was a busy day for them inside because they had to keep their robots up to date and running smoothly.Wile Tommy and Lola work on Ro and Rina Gus chilled out on Tommy's bed and counted his super hero collecter coins.
Gus:Aw man have I got the best coins in the world or what!?!
Tommy:Sure you do Gus.How you feelin Ro?
Robotboy:Robotboy hate ruteen maintence! Wish I real boy so no have to be repaired all the time.
Rina:What so great about being real boy or girl?
Tommy:We told you Rina Ro wants to be human so he can be just like us like having the abblity to cry , feel , touch and grow".
Rina:....
Lola:Being human is more then that like having the abblity to love , forgive and cherish.Don't you wanna be like us?
Rina:Yes but not know if really want to become human or not..
Lola:Maybee in you'll come to find out on your own why Moshimo wants you to become human like Robotboy..
Rina:He dose?
Lola:Yeah it's time you knew the truth..
(Flashback)
Lola:(to Moshimo on wrist watch)Moshimo why did you create Rina?
Moshimo:To give Robotboy a family member help him learn about family love and kinship.
Lola:Is that all?
Moshimo:No , after Rina was built I though it best that maybee best she too could learn to become a human after seeing her and Robotboy bond over time.."
Lola:Should Rina know this?
Moshimo:Only when you feel it's the best time to tell her."
Lola:Right.
(Flashback Ends)
Rina:Moshimo want me to be real girl..
Lola:Being human also means you won't have to be contencly repaired day after day.
Rina...
Robotboy:Don't Rina want to be like Robotboy and be human?
Rina:Rina unsure..
Robotboy:Robotboy and friends help Rina see why becoming human good!
Tommy:Yeah will show you , you already have some human traits like the way you did'nt blast Kamazazi the with the giant robotic ant..You choose to have mercy on Kamazazi instead of blasting him and took out your rage on the giant robotic ant.
Rina:Moshimo say never hurt humans cause humans can't hurt us.Moshimo also say protect humans in need.
Robotboy:Our Oyaji great man! Speaks words of wisdom!
Rina:Yeah..(Starts speaking to Ro in japnese) (Moshimo want Rina really to become human?)
Robotbot:(In japnese)(Yes , Moshimo want both of us to become human...)
Rina:..
Gus:Hey! Were not from Japan so can you please spaek in english?
Tommy:Gus..
Lola:They baiscally talk about being human..Now enough of this lets get back to fixing these to so we can take them to the crius.
Robotboy:Rina cause consider becoming human?
Rina:...Yes...Rina consider..
Robotboy:(Smiles)
Gus:Hey you guys check this out a gold hero coin!
Tommy:It's probelly just gold-plated Gus..
Gus:No check it out!
(As Gus trys to get off he trips and drops the gold coin which flys out of his hand and lands right in between one of Rina's rotating gears!)
Gus:Uh-Oh!
Rina:(gose haywire)Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!BEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!(gose offline)
Tommy and Lola:Rina!
Robotboy:Imoto! (shakes Rina) Wake up! Wake Up!
Tommy:We better call Moshimo fast!
Lola:Forget calling we should just take Rina to him!
Gus:But we don't know were he lives!
Lola:You stay out of this your stupid coin is what caused this mess!
Tommy:Ro your our only hope dose Moshimo live now?
Robotboy:(huggles Rina) Robotboy show you,,
(Ro uses his compass to show were Moshimo's house is which appeared to be in Japan's mountin range).
Lola:(Picks up the off-lined Rina and hops on Tommy's bed) Ro we need you to fly us to Moshimo's at top speed! You 2 get on the bed!
Tommy and Gus:Yes Ma'am! (the two boys get on the bed)
Lola:Ro take us to Moshimo please.
Robotboy:You got it! (Ro grabs the bed and flys Tommy , Gus and Lola to Moshimo).
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on Mar 4, 2007 2:06:06 GMT -5
Oh dear look at what Gus has done now those robots aren't safe around him. No wonder he doesn't get robot
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 4, 2007 11:33:31 GMT -5
Ch-Hurry to Moshimo
Robotboy flew the kids as fast as he could to Moshimo's place but they had hurry cause the coin inbeded in Rina's gears was suck tight and none of the kids could pull it out and Robotboy didn't dare try to yank it out cause he might be to storng and snap the coin in half leaving a part of the coin in Rina.
Tommy:Weve got hurry Robotboy! Rina dosen't look so good!
Lola:(Looking over Rina's gears)Looks like it's wedged in there tight. I go over Rina's outlook (turns on wrist watch and a blue-print model of Rina shows up)Uh-huh.Looks like the coin is suck between her back gears which help her stand up.
Gus:How will that effect her SA powers?
Lola:Rina needs all her gears running smooth to Super Activate.
Tommy:So Gus did bad thing?
Lola:Yes but it was a accedent so we should'nt really blame him.
Gus:I find a way to save you Rina!
Robotboy:No Moshimo will!
Gus:But Robotboy I wanna help..
Robotboy:You do enough!
Gus:But...
Robotboy:....
Lola:We'll all find a way to save her...But Moshimo is gonna flip when he sees what happen to one of his robots.
Tommy:Muemue won't be to happy...
Lola:Speaking of both Moshimo and Muemue there's their house!
Gus:Were in Japan?
Tommy:Yep! Time gose pretty fast when your traveling with a cutting edge robot! Right Ro?
Robotboy:Yep! Go to be at home..
Tommy:Home?
Robotboy:Japan home...but love new home with Tommy!
Lola:Theres the house from Ro's compass image!
Tommy:Ro go to that house!
Robotboy:Ok!
(Ro flys the kids to Moshimo and Muemue's house).
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Post by Teros on Mar 4, 2007 12:58:02 GMT -5
Good to see someone using the fact that Gus is a complete and utter moron and making a plot out of that.
I think that this and your other fic (after revising it) should be put on fanfiction sites (e.g. fanfiction.net) because you are a really good writer
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 4, 2007 15:45:00 GMT -5
Ch-4 A runin with a friend...
(Ro flew the to the front of the house and he went to the door bell the door opened someone jumped on him!)
Robotgirl:Me know you come back!
Robotboy:Heheh..Hi Robotgirl..
Lola:Who's that?
Tommy:Robotgirl , Proffor Moshimo made her as compaion for Robotboy.
Lola:She's cute..I wonder how Rina will react to once she's fixed
Gus:There'll probelly be a showdown between the 2 robots to fight for Robotboy's affections!
Lola:Yeah right...Rina is very understanding and knows that she when she and Ro sould be together.Anyway we got to get Rina to Moshimo quick!(Hops off bed and carries Rina to the front door where the 2 robots are).
Lola:Robotgirl?
Robotgirl:Huh?
Lola:Where friends of Robotboy and we need to get a damaged robot to Moshimo quickly.
Robotgirl:Friends?
Robotboy:Friends!
Robotgirl:Friends. (notices Rina) Who that? She look like us.
Robotboy:Robotsister also named Rina.
Group:Robotsister?
Robotboy:Yes was orignal name for Rina.
Robotgirl:She need help?
Robotboy:(nods)
Robotgirl:Ok..MOSHIMO!
(Silence)
Robotgirl:He might not hear Robotgirl..MO (Robotboy put a hand over her mouth)
Robotboy:No need yell we just go find him..
Rootgirl:Right!
(Robotgirl leads the kids inside the house to find Moshimo).
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 4, 2007 17:13:59 GMT -5
Ch-5 Lets Have Hope..
(Robotgirl lead the group throuh the house to find Moshimo)
Tommy:Where is he?
Robotboy:Tommy...Rina be ok right?
Tommy:Don't worry Ro Moshimo is best robotics macaic in the world , he built you , Rina and Robotgirl.
Robotboy:Right...
(The group decides to go to Moshimo's lab)
In Moshimo's lab the group found Moshimo and Muemue playing Tetris on a giant tv screen).
Moshimo:You beat me again Muemue.
Muemue:(giggles and notices the kids) Robotboy is here...
Moshimo:Robotboy? (turns and see the group).
Robotgirl:Friends here for help!
Moshimo:Help? What's wrong?
Tommy:We were repairing Robotboy and Rina when well Gus acciently droped a gold plated coin in Rina's back gears..
Lola:(turns Rina around shows Moshimo the problem.) We though best to just come here show better then call you cause after the coin was injected Rina went off line.
Moshimo:(takes Rina from Lola) Oh dear..I'll have to look it right away.Muemue please get my equiment ready I have take out this coin emedly for if I don't Rina will never run again.
Lola:Is there anything we can do?
Moshimo:Yes there is when I finshed with Rina I need to charge her so I can get her running again but for that I need to power up the Charge Chamber.So I need you to go the basement and plug it in.
Gus:Is the tha chamber in the basement?
Moshimo:No but the chamber's power cord runs from here all the way to the basement.
Gus:Oh.. Well I'll go I kinda owe it to Rina.
Lola:Kinda!?! Your stupid coin caused her to shut down! Anyway I'll go make sure you don't break anything.
Robotgirl:Me go to! Want to save new friend!
Tommy:I'll stay here and watch what you do to Rina..I may need to know if it ever happens to Robotboy.
Moshimo:Ok..Good..Robotboy?
Robotboy:(looks at his lifeless sister)Robotboy stay here and watch over Rina.
Moshimo:Ok..The basement group please go and plug in the Charger.
Basement Group:Right! (The group runs off the the basement).
Moshimo:(To Rina) Don't worry we won't let you die..We care to much to let you experence that.
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on Mar 5, 2007 1:30:53 GMT -5
wow never expected Robotgirl to be here I her and Robotboy are sooo cute together. anyway keep it up I hope Rina will be ok.
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Post by Teros on Mar 5, 2007 12:28:51 GMT -5
This all seems to be comeing along well, cant wait for the next chapter
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 6, 2007 18:05:37 GMT -5
Ch-5 Things Take Time...
Moshimo:(Puts Rina on lab table) I've never lost a robot to death well expect Protoboy but I won't lose anymore..So I do my very best to fix Rina..
Muemue:Boys maybee you better wait in the Opservion Room..It's porbelly best you leave Moshimo work on Rina alone..
Moshimo:Muemue's right it might better if you watch from a far because Robotboy might get to worried in view of his sister's opperation.
Tommy:He would?
Moshimo:Robotboy and Rina have deep kinship and love each other tenderly so it can get emotional for them to see either one in pain.
Tommy:Your probelly right come on Ro..
Robotboy:(almost leaks oil (a form of crying) )Imoto...
(The to boys walk out of Moshimo's lab in the next room which had a huge window that viewed into Moshimo's lab).
(Moshimo scans Rina and look at her robotic x-ray on a giant tv screen)
Moshimo:(Look at the x-ray and turns to Rina) Lets see what happen to you...Hmmmm somehow that coin got wedged it's way into your back gears pretty hard.The coin is blocking your gears from spinning which casused you to shut-down.Your symtems all need to be running smoothly for you to operate.I'll do my best to wedge the coin out of there and then take out your back gears and clean them to get rid of the gunk that rubed againest your gears and hope by putting them back in and recharging you you'll come back to life.By the look of that x-ray your eletric brain is operating a little so thats a sign your still working a little.Lets hope we can fix you I don't want to lose you and nither do the rest of us espially Robotboy and Lola.
(Moshimo starts working on Rina)
(In the Observation Room Robotboy pounds the wall with his fist wile Tommy watchs)
Robotboy:Robotboy angery want to help Rina!
Tommy:I know you do Ro what can we do? Moshimo's better at this stuff then anyone so lets hope on him for fixing Rina.
Robotboy:This Gus fault! He send coin into Rina!
Tommy:It was a acident Ro you know that..
Robotboy:Yeah but still angery...
Tommy:Well just think about a time when you where happy...
Robotboy:When Rina got over fear of Super Actaving for first time.
Tommy:She was scared the first time?
Robotboy:Yes...
(Flashback)
Moshimo:(To Robotboy and Rina) You both have a great power in side of you the power to Super Activate which allows you to change into a much bigger battle bot which is compleate with more weaponry then you could every dream.Although first you have do a battle dance to Super Activate so follow my lead.
(Moshimo dose the SA dance)
Moshimo:Robotboy you go first..
Robotboy:(Super Activates) Robotboy big...
Rina:(freaks out to what Ro just changed into)EKKKKKKKK!(Runs out the room!)
Robotboy:Imoto!(flys after still in SA mode)
Moshimo:Rina , Robotboy get back here!
Rina:(runs outside and hides in a cave)
Ro scans in on Rina's location and goes into the cave.
Robotboy:Imoto!
Rina:Go away you no Oniisan you diffrent!
Robotboy:Imoto me no diffrent still Oniisan just bigger and have more weapons.
Rina:(See that Ro is telling the truth)Oniisan!(hugs her BIG brother),
Robotboy:You can change too just do dance Moshimo showed us.
Rina:Me don't know...
(The Robots bonding moment is spoiled by Kamazazi and Consintine and their robot chicken army)
Kamazazi:Look Consintine Moshimo's little Robotboy has finally "grown up"! HA!HA!
Consintine:What about the little robot Boss?
Kamazazi:Ahh..Moshimo probelly just built her to acompany Robotboy when he's in normal mode! She's no thret to us! Chickens attack!
Rina:No Threat? Me very poweful!(Super Activates for the first time!)
Rina:Me big too..
Robotboy:Moshimo make us the the same..Time to fight Chickens!You with me?
Rina:Hai!(hive fives her brother)
(Robotboy and Rina blast all the mind controlers of the chickens and sho them off)
Consintine:They beat all the chickens Boss!
Kamazazi:So what? They still to deal with my giant robotic rooster! Rooster attack!
Robotboy:(To Rina)Attack with double cannons from back!
Rina:Attack with wh-(Rina absent mindly attacked with her dould cannons) How I do that?
Robotboy:We programed to know what to do in battle situation.(Blasts Rooster)
Rina:Ohh..(Blasts Rooster)
(The Rooster walked around unstrached)
Kamazazi:Ha! You fools my bird is made out of the strongest metal money can buy...
Moshimo:(Walks in)And my Robots have the best cutter blades money can buy! Robotboy , Rina use your cutter blades to saw open that rooster brain and destory the atenna that gives rooster the abblity to walk and the both of you saw the through the brain together!
(The Robots did what they where told and saw open to the rooster's brain and destroyed the antenna which caused the rooster to stop moving and then they sawed through the rooster's brain and attacked it but the brain went unfazed so Robotboy ripped out the rain inners and Rina used ice breath to freeze it and then she blasted it with her eye beams , then Ro blasted it with a arm cannon and then Rina shattered it wit a gint hammer that Moshimo threw her but it was still Ro stepped on it then kicked it and then Rina spat oil on it and broke.)
Rina:We did it(hugs her bro)
Robotboy:We did do it together!(hugs Rina back)
Kamazazi:I'll be back! Consintine run!
Consintine:Coming Boss!
(The two bad guys ran off)
Robotboy and Rina turn to Moshimo
Moshimo:I'm am so proud of the both you.You both must be tired so to reverse your tranformation just relax and let go your thoughs you'll powe down)
The Robots did as they where told and powered downed.
Moshimo:Rina Im glad you learned first impressions are not always important but don't run away from your problems next time..Ok?
Rina:Rina try...
Flashback Ends
Tommy:Whoooaaa..You guys are pretty close
Robotboy:Yes We very close hich is why me very worried about Rina...
Tommy:We'll save her Ro I promise!
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on Mar 7, 2007 1:51:57 GMT -5
awwwww Robotboy needs a hug (Why didn't Tommy hug him?) Tommy shouldn't really make promises he can't keep but hey you wouldn't kill of your own fan charater would ya. anyway keep it up. (hugs Robotboy)
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 7, 2007 16:07:53 GMT -5
I won't kill off my character she's important to me.
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 7, 2007 18:31:53 GMT -5
Ch-3 Plugged In..
(Lola and Gus find the way to the basemest with Robotgirl's help by showing them a holo map of Moshimo's house).
Gus:Ok so this the door to the basement?
Robotgirl:Yep!
Lola:Let's go..
(Lola opens the door to the basement and she , Gus and Robotgirl walk down into the basement.)
Gus:Hey it's to dark in here! Where's lightswitch?
Lola:Robotgirl can you brighten up things in here please?
Robotgirl:Uh-huh! (uses eye lights to bright up the area).
Gus:Look theres the lightswitch!
(Gus flicks on the lightswitch on the wall.)
Seeing how Gus turned on the lights Robotgirl turned of her eye lights.
Robotgirl:Where charger plug?
Lola:There! (Points to a big plug sitting on the floor)
Gus:Is that it?
Lola:It says Charger Chamber on it.
Gus:Oh...Come on lets get it plugged in so Rina can be recharged!
Lola:Things arn't that easy look!
(A small army of robotic rats surrounded them!)
Gus:What are these things?
Robotgirl:Moshimo like to make robotic rats to past time...
Lola:Why Rats?
Robotgirl:Rats better shooting practice then bugs.
Gus:Anyway just don't stand there fight them Robotgirl!
Lola:(a robot rat moves closer to Lola)Hurry!
Robotgirl Super Activates and crushs all the rats with her mighty feet!
(One of the rats grows huge and roars them)
Lola:How'd that happen?
Robotgirl:Moshimo give one rat Super Activate powers.
Lola:What's it's weakness?
Robotgirl:(Rips out the Robotic Rat's brain)That.
(The Robotic Rat falls down lifeless or so it seems...(Where Robotgirl had ripped the brain out there was a anntenna in it's head still blinking..)
Lola:Now that that's over can we move on to saving Rina?
Gus:Yes ma'am seriously you always have to make it about you.
Lola:I'm worried about my robot who was shut down no thanks to you!
Gus:Hey I said I would find a way to save her!
Lola:We all did!
(The Robotic Rat comes alive again)
Robotgirl:(Notices the Rat) Guys...?
(Lola and Gus continue agruing)
(The Robotic Rat prepares to strike!)
Robotgirl:Humans!
Lola and Gus:What?!?
(Lola and Gus then notice the Robotic Rat)
Lola and Gus:Run! (Lola and Gus run around in cirles screaming in terror)
Robotgirl:(Sighs)Humans...
(Robotgirl jumps on to the Robotic Rat and grabs the Rat's robotic heart out of it chests and stomps on it causing the Rat to fall over again and then Robotgirl blasts it causing it to stop moving a least for now...)
Gus:Wow your asesome!
Lola:All of Moshimo's creations are asesome!
Gus:Yah but she taoally kicked the Rat's butt!
Lola:So she's Moshimo's creation and they are all wicked fighters!
Gus:Yah but she was too cool!
Lola:Gus...Were here to save another one of Moshimo's great creations remeber?
Gus:Yeah right..Now lets put in that plug!
(The 2 kids try picking up the plug but it's too heavy)
Lola:Robotgirl can you help?
Robotgirl picks up the plug and puts it in the wall but it only gose in half way!
Gus:What why didn't work!?!
Lola:It's stuck , this happens to plugs sometimes.
Gus:But if it dose'nt plug in we won't be able to save Rina!
Lola:And I loose my one of closest friends..(crys)
Robotgirl:Robotgirl have plan two kids ride on Robotgirl and ram plug!
Lola:That sounds dagerouse..
Gus:Boo hoo You wanna save your robot or what?
Lola:Yes..
Gus:Then lets go!(grabs Lola's arm and moves her over to Robotgirl)
(The 2 kids climb up on Robotgirl and hold on tightly)
Gus:Charge!
Robotgirl flys a semi fast pase to knock the plug further into the wall which she dose but the plug still didn't go in all of the way.
Lola:This thing is so stupid!(punches the plug which didn't move!)
Gus:Now Will never save Rina and it's all my fault!
Lola:It's not your fault Gus it's mine..I wanted to spend the day with Tommy so I brought Rina with me to his house and though repairing our robots togeter might make for some bonding time...Whoops did you just hear me? (blushes)
Gus:(Not paying attention)What I did hear you I was too busy thinking about Rina who I'm going to save!
Lola:How?
Gus:By doing this! (Gus takes a running dash on Robotgirl who was still flying in midair and rammed the plug with all his might which cause him to fly off Robotgirl but also caused the plug to go in all the way!)
Lola:You did it! Are you ok?
Gus:Yah the ground broke my fall!
Lola:We were only to meters from the ground.You should be fine.
Gus:I think I hurt my back!
Lola:But your will saved Rina look!
Gus looked to see the plug compleatlly plugged in.
Lola:I guess all that body weight had to come in handy sooner or later.
Gus:Hey no fat jokes!
Lola:(giggles)Sorry..
Muemue:(Walks into the basement) Oh dear! What happend here and to Gus?
Lola:Long story short We got the plug to charger working thanks to Gus.
Muemue:Oh..but thats not the plug charger..
Lola and Gus:It's not?!?
Muemue:Kidding!
Lola and Gus sigh in releif
Muemue:Come on I take you the frist aid room to help Gus get better , then I'll take you to see your friends.
Lola:How's Rina...?
Muemue:Moshimo is still tenning to her..
Gus:Lets get back and see whats going on.
Lola:After we get you treated! It's not every day you ram into a giant plug to save a robot.
Gus:Yeah..
Muemue:(Leads the kids to the stairs) This way.. Robotgirl can you carry Gus?
Robotgirl:(Changes back to normal mode)Yep!(Puts Gus on her back).
(Everyone walks out of basement unnoticing the giant Robotic Rat was straining)
In Moshimo's Lab..
Moshimo had made several efforts to jiggle the coin with each jiggle a little step closer.)
Moshimo:(Finally pulls out coin)Whoaa..Finally! Your one step closer to being repaired..
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Post by Robotboyfanatic on Mar 8, 2007 1:31:36 GMT -5
Hee hee poor Gus that's one way to plug somthing big in (Not the recommended way though lol). Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Post by Teros on Mar 8, 2007 14:37:51 GMT -5
Why didnt they just pull the plug out and put it in again or wiggle it around or something rather than trying to smash it in?
Anyways good chapter, next one should be good
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Post by robotboyiscute on Mar 8, 2007 16:13:55 GMT -5
Wanted to make it more thrilling that cause Gus was the one who accdenly caused Rina's accident I gave him a heroic moment.
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